Deltarune Ch 3 & 4 are still terrible lol

Описание: Originally I had a really long intro segment at the start about why I made the video, and how I didn't expect the original to get as many views as it did. How I'm making this video for the people who want it, and because I'm a lunatic who strives for absolute perfection, but I cut all of it for brevity.
I complimented Keebler Elf's Deltarune Critique as being the greatest critique of a modern piece of media I've ever read. (probably because it wasn't written by a youtuber) I absolutely recommend you check it out if you haven't already.
I've been working on the script of this video since the original Chapter 3 and 4 video released, so most of the time any overlap with it is coincidental, though I'm sure it ended up having some influence.
Read it here: https://greedykeeblerelf.blogspot.com...

I think making this was a good experience for me, even if it wasn't all that enjoyable. I have a better idea of what I enjoy writing and editing.