pan nanpa wan ("Pie in the Sky") — TOKI PONA SONG

Описание: You will eat, by and by; in that glorious land in the sky…
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Salt Lake City, 1915. A late autumn chill has begun to spread over the valley, from the grand Wasatch mountains in the east to the Great Salt Lake in the west. In the southeastern corner of town, in a neighborhood called Sugar House — named for the old Mormon sugar mill which once stood there — a man sits alone in a prison cell, condemned to die by firing squad. Though he faces a grim fate, the man maintains a stern, resolute gaze as he puts these words to paper:

This is my last and final Will—
Good Luck to all of you.
                                        Joe Hill

Though an innocent man, Swedish-American union organizer and songwriter Joe Hill was charged, tried, and convicted of the 1914 murder of a local grocer and his son, and was subsequently put to death on November 19, 1915 at the Sugar House Prison in Salt Lake City, Utah.

Visitors to today's Sugar House Park are astonished to learn that the rolling green hills before them once framed the austere walls of a prison complex. There, in 2015, I had the opportunity to attend a centennial celebration and folk music concert in honor of Joe Hill and his legacy. In addition to meeting Duncan Phillips, son of the late folk music legend Utah Phillips, it was at this performance where I first heard what is likely Hill's most famous song, "The Preacher and the Slave." The song is a scathing critique of the Salvation Army and other religious organizations which demand both reverence and financial contributions while offering to the poor and destitute only the empty assurance that a grand reward awaits in the afterlife: "You'll get pie in the sky when you die."

The following is my attempt at a Toki Pona rendition of Hill's immortal ballad. May we all beware the "long-haired preachers" of our modern age, religious or otherwise- who put wealth before welfare, piety before practice, convenience before compassion.

Special thanks to jan Masu for help and general advice on the translation!
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VERSE A
jan lawa sewi li toki sike
toki ona la: "sina ike!"
sina wile e moku lili;
taso, ona li toki e ni:

CHORUS
moku la? sina nasa!
jan li jo anu jo ala la pona
pan suwi li lon ma sewi;
ona li pan nanpa wan tawa jan!

VERSE B
ona li jo e ilo kalama
li wile toki e jan lon lupa
ona li lanpan e pan, e mani
pini la, ona li toki e ni:

CHORUS
moku la? sina nasa!
jan li jo anu jo ala la pona (suwi a!)
pan suwi li lon ma sewi;
ona li pan nanpa wan tawa jan!

VERSE C
jan li pali tan ona olin
anu li wile pi pona lukin
… la, jan li ike, li kama jaki;
ona li seli lon tenpo moli

taso, kama la ante li ken
lon poka ante pi nena kiwen
sina ale o pana pali!
jan lanpan jo la, mi toki e ni:

CHORUS (END)
moku la? sina nasa!
jan li jo anu jo ala la pona (suwi a!)
pan suwi li lon ma sewi;
ona li pan nanpa wan tawa jan!
sike a!

moku la? sina nasa!
jan li jo anu jo ala la pona (suwi a!)
pan suwi li lon ma sewi;
ona li pan nanpa wan tawa jan!