This Personal Statement could be GREAT IF... | PS or BS Episode 15

Описание: On this episode of PS or BS, Dr. Ryan Gray critiques a personal statement that starts off on the right foot but falls short because of a vital missing ingredient: reflection.

The student has a great clinical anecdote and an emotional family introduction, but no "why medicine" answer without reflection. From the solid opening anecdote to a lackluster finish, Dr. Gray threads through each paragraph, noting where the essay gets it right and where it must do better to dazzle.

Key Takeaway:
Strong storytelling without reflection won’t convince adcoms. Readers need to understand what your experiences meant and how they shaped your decision to become a physician.

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