Why Most Opening Lines Fail (And How to Fix Yours)
Автор: Christie Greenwood
Загружено: 2026-02-20
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In this video, I break down what makes a first sentence work, why some iconic openings are brilliant, and how vagueness, cliché, overwriting, and overexplanation quietly kill tension.
We’ll look at examples from The Gunslinger, The Handmaid’s Tale, and 1984 ... and then I’ll ruin them on purpose to show you exactly what not to do.
If you're drafting or revising your novel, this analysis will help you evaluate whether your first line is intentional or just vibes.
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