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You guys rock! Here's one of my newest projects. It's not MLP-Related, but a good chunk of you guys seem to also enjoy my Touhou works so I'm posting the second draft of it just for you guys!

With that in mind I would love to get some feedback from you guys on this one. Leave your comments and rest assured they WILL be read.

DEADLY FANTASY by Odyssey & The DNA Team
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Your finesse
Is sending shivers
through my spine
Once again, I plead
"Once again", I beg
One more time for your
cruel play time
Innocence was never shed
so gracefully
Just a bit too much
Just a bit too far
Darling what have you
done to me?!?

Deadly fantasy
We are far beyond salvation
Pride is why we never let our
souls becoming clean
Deadly fantasy
Far from safe and far from healthy
So, where do you go, how to get saved?

"So naïve and
innocent," they said of me
Not to realize
not to recognize
there's a darker side breaking out!
Fatal blow you've
dealt to all my
deepest pride
Irresistible
Uncontainable
You're tonight what it's all about!