I Saw Your Comment
Автор: Sheikh Hamdan Fazza Pomes
Загружено: 2026-02-01
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I saw your comment
and the world paused—
not loudly,
not with thunder or drama,
but the way the universe pauses
when it knows something important has just happened.
It was just a line,
just a sentence,
just a few words resting quietly
among hundreds of others.
But my heart recognized it
the way the sea recognizes the moon.
I wasn’t looking for you.
I was scrolling—
half-present, half-tired,
mind wandering between yesterday’s regrets
and tomorrow’s unanswered questions.
Life felt ordinary,
muted,
almost forgettable.
And then—
there you were.
Not your face.
Not your voice.
Not your name spoken aloud.
Just your words.
Yet somehow,
those words carried you.
I saw your comment
and something inside me leaned closer,
like my soul whispering,
“Pay attention. This one matters.”
It wasn’t loud.
It didn’t beg for likes or applause.
It didn’t try to impress the room.
It simply existed—
honest, calm, real.
And that’s what broke me.
Because in a world screaming to be noticed,
you chose to speak softly.
And softness,
when it’s real,
is dangerous.
I read it once.
Then again.
Then slower.
Then with that strange smile
people get when they don’t yet understand
why their heart feels warmer.
I told myself,
“It’s nothing.”
“It’s just a comment.”
“Don’t romanticize this.”
But the heart doesn’t listen to logic
when it recognizes truth.
Your words didn’t try to change me,
yet they shifted something.
They didn’t promise anything,
yet they felt reliable.
They didn’t flirt,
yet they felt intimate.
How is that possible?
I wondered what kind of mind
chooses words like that.
What kind of person pauses long enough
to think before speaking.
What kind of soul
leaves a trace of kindness
without needing credit.
I imagined you—
not perfectly,
not clearly,
but warmly.
I imagined your pauses,
the way you might reread your sentence
before posting it.
I imagined your hesitation,
your quiet confidence,
your restraint.
And suddenly,
a stranger didn’t feel like a stranger anymore.
I saw your comment
and felt something rare:
respect before attraction,
curiosity before desire,
connection before fantasy.
That’s dangerous territory.
Because attraction fades.
Desire burns fast and dies louder.
But connection?
Connection settles in the chest
and rearranges the furniture.
I kept scrolling,
pretending I wasn’t thinking about it.
Pretending I hadn’t memorized
the rhythm of your words.
Pretending I hadn’t already returned
to reread it for the fifth time.
But I had.
And I wondered—
Do you know what you did?
Do you know that somewhere,
someone paused their life
because of something you typed casually
between moments of your own?
Probably not.
People like you rarely know
the weight of their presence.
They move gently through the world,
unaware of the echoes they leave behind.
I saw your comment
and suddenly the noise around me felt fake.
The arguments, the jokes, the chaos—
all of it blurred.
Because one honest voice
can silence a crowd.
I didn’t fall in love.
Not yet.
But something opened.
A door.
A window.
A possibility I hadn’t planned for.
And the strangest part?
You didn’t try.
You didn’t reach out.
You didn’t chase.
You didn’t announce yourself.
You simply spoke—
and that was enough.
That’s how I knew
this wasn’t ordinary.
Somewhere inside me,
a quiet thought formed,
uninvited but clear:
“If this is who you are
when you don’t even know I’m watching,
who are you when you care?”
I closed the app.
Put the phone down.
Stared at the ceiling.
And for the first time in a long while,
I smiled for no reason
anyone could explain.
Because I saw your comment.
And the world,
just for a moment,
felt less empty.
🌒
Say “Continue Part II” when you’re ready.
This story is only beginning…
I have you—
not the way the world owns things,
not like a name written on paper
or a promise trapped inside a ring.
I have you
the way dawn has the horizon,
the way silence has meaning,
the way breath has life.
I have you
in the quiet seconds
between heartbeats,
where the universe pauses
just long enough
to remember why love was invented.
When the world grows loud
with its rules and wars and opinions,
when days arrive carrying exhaustion
like a second shadow,
I have you—
and suddenly,
nothing else asks to be explained.
I have you
when my hands are empty
and my dreams are heavy.
I have you
when hope limps instead of runs.
I have you
even when words fail me,
because my soul
learned your language
long before my mouth ever tried.
I don’t need to shout it.
I don’t need to prove it.
The truth of “I have you”
is not loud—
it’s deep.
I have you
in the way my thoughts circle back to you
like rivers returning to the sea,
no matter how far they wander.
Every road inside me
somehow learns your name.
I have you
in the future I imagine
without forcing the picture.
You are already there—
standing calmly
as if you’ve always known
you belong.
I have you
in small, invisible ways:
in
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