WORST COMMON APP ESSAY and UC ESSAY MISTAKES + IDEAL Common App and UC Essays with examples | 2020

Описание: if you're still writing your essays I gotchu. Go over your essays to make sure you haven't made these Common App and UC Essay mistakes! We also talk about the ideal UC and Common App Essays in this vid! This is what I learned from editing over 70+ essays so I thought I would collectively address them in a video. Hope it helps and good luck :)

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Time Stamps:
0:00 : Intro
1:43 : Layout of the video
2:03 : General Essay mistakes
4:06 : Differences between the UC and Common App Essays
4:37 : The ideal Common App Essay
6:09 : The ideal UC Essay
6:24 : Common App Essay mistakes
6:26 : Don't JUST describe a situation
8:25 : Don't make it too academic
9:46 : Don't explicitly TELL US
10:50 : UC Essay mistakes
11:03 : Don't add FLUFF
12:01 : Don't leave them disconnected
13:15 : Don't pick common prompts

Music used in this video:
Not The King - My Go Away Dream
Joakim Karud - Waves
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the music in this video. All rights go to the original owners.