Stop Writing “And Then” Stories

Описание: Most weak stories aren’t weak because of bad writing.

They’re weak because they’re overloaded.

Too many scenes. Too many ideas. Too much “and then this happened… and then this happened…”

In today’s Wordslinger 10-Shot, we’re talking about what to leave out of your book — and why mastering cause-and-effect storytelling is the key to writing novels that actually work.

If your story feels scattered, slow, or unfocused… this is the fix.
Because story isn’t about “and then.”
It’s about because… therefore.

If you’re a novelist, nonfiction writer, creative, or entrepreneur who uses storytelling to build your brand — this episode will sharpen your instincts immediately.

⏱️ Timecodes
00:00 – The real problem isn’t what to write…
01:00 – When too many “brilliant ideas” ruin a book
01:50 – “Murder your darlings” (and why it matters)
02:45 – Does this move the story forward?
04:00 – The “Because… Then…” storytelling rule
05:30 – The Influence experiment and why “because” works
07:00 – Off-screen cause & effect example
08:45 – Plotters vs Pantsers: how to apply this method
09:30 – What to cut from your book (final takeaway)

🧠 Key Topics Covered
Cause and effect storytelling
Editing your novel
Strengthening story structure
Cutting unnecessary scenes
Plot development for writers
Avoiding episodic “and then” writing
Writing tighter, more compelling fiction

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